Saturday, April 26, 2008
THE HUNTER HUNTED
Mr. Heelas was aware that something was amiss in Kemp's house. He know that it was the invisible man's doing. He didnt allow Kemp to come in when Kemp asked him for help. So, Kemp ran away. Suddenly, he grabbed the invisible man. Finally, they managed to grab hold of him and caught him .
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"Know" should be "knew." Don't change tense in the middle of a sentence unless you have a good reason. Don't forget the apostrophe in "didn't."
You haven't added anything since April 26! You've got a lot of work to do.
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